I better understand Hugh’s inner voice—the rhymes. But new puzzles arise. The possible second car at the time of the accident??? I’m still thinking about the black Peugeot in chapter 1…just saying.
I’m in. The characters compelling and real, the visceral feel of a place and time, not just physically, but emotionally, the dialogue and character development…. Eager to read on!
Yes, what about that black Peugeot? I’m still trying to find a metaphor for Hugh’s OCD.
I better understand Hugh’s inner voice—the rhymes. But new puzzles arise. The possible second car at the time of the accident??? I’m still thinking about the black Peugeot in chapter 1…just saying.
I’m in. The characters compelling and real, the visceral feel of a place and time, not just physically, but emotionally, the dialogue and character development…. Eager to read on!
Great backstory 👍